Kelly - it's looking very visual, well done!You're absolutely working on the right track - to ensure a top grade - To improve: 1. Find out why Slide share has disbanded your presentation. When you do add it to your post you can embed it using the embed code. This always looks better than a link. 2. Not enough info on first post re Genre. See me if you need more resources. 3. Change the 'Western case study heading to "Genres changing over time and make it evident in the first paragraph that this is what this post is about. 4. Please write up a brief summary on the film re Narrative so that it is evident you have learnt it's contents - Narrative is essential info for this year and next.
Kelly - it's looking very visual, well done!You're absolutely working on the right track - to ensure a top grade -
ReplyDeleteTo improve:
1. Find out why Slide share has disbanded your presentation. When you do add it to your post you can embed it using the embed code. This always looks better than a link.
2. Not enough info on first post re Genre. See me if you need more resources.
3. Change the 'Western case study heading to "Genres changing over time and make it evident in the first paragraph that this is what this post is about.
4. Please write up a brief summary on the film re Narrative so that it is evident you have learnt it's contents - Narrative is essential info for this year and next.